Hallo ihr lieben,
ich habe vor, mal ein Jahr als Au-Pair in Irland zu machen, und muss mich dafür auf Englisch bewerben - nur leider bin ich sehr verunsichert, weil sich alles nicht ganz so richtig anhört.
Hat vielleicht jemand lust, den folgeneden Text zu verbessern? Ich wäre mehr als dankbar!!!
Alle lieben Grüße, S.
Dear Ladies and Gentlemen,
my name is S., I'm 20Years old and was born in Hamburg, Germany.
At Present I visiting the 13th class of a comprihansive school and I get through my matriculation.
I live together with my father and a cat, but I'm really often near my mother to visiting my brothers and sisters.
I have young brothers and sisters, and it is a great consequence to me seeing them so often I can!
Since I'm 11years old. I'm at the scouts, an for five years I'm the leader of a scoutgroup. In this group deem exklusiv girls between 11-14years, and we make small journies for a weekend every month with our tend in beutyful regions with in a radius of Hamburg. We singing very much, playing together, tinkering something and having fun! In the summerholidays we travel around for three weeks to a foreign cauntry, till now I was in Austria, Wales, Italy, France an Greek with the childs.
This big journies are the special moments every year!
If I'm not at the scouts, I spent my time for reading, going to cinema, an I like going on a journy. Morever I'm on the way with friends to test strange cities.
Now I want to dare passing in a foreign cauntry fore a long time. I know people who were many years in Ireland, so I know, wich interesting mentality be represented there, and I wonder whether to go through this expeience.
But the importend reason is nevertheless to raise my english with making use of the languarge every day, because I want to employ it perfektly in the next years of my life.
Since I can collect experience with kids, I want unconditional a year as an Au Pair in Ireland. Because I growed by my father, its not strong for me to dispatch some indoor work, since I were competent for every occour work. I know, that I will take pleasure in the challenge of living with a stange family in a foreign cauntry and master everything.
I hope to find a family wich is also cheerful and jovial like me!
With friendly greetings, S.
ich habe vor, mal ein Jahr als Au-Pair in Irland zu machen, und muss mich dafür auf Englisch bewerben - nur leider bin ich sehr verunsichert, weil sich alles nicht ganz so richtig anhört.
Hat vielleicht jemand lust, den folgeneden Text zu verbessern? Ich wäre mehr als dankbar!!!
Alle lieben Grüße, S.
Dear Ladies and Gentlemen,
my name is S., I'm 20Years old and was born in Hamburg, Germany.
At Present I visiting the 13th class of a comprihansive school and I get through my matriculation.
I live together with my father and a cat, but I'm really often near my mother to visiting my brothers and sisters.
I have young brothers and sisters, and it is a great consequence to me seeing them so often I can!
Since I'm 11years old. I'm at the scouts, an for five years I'm the leader of a scoutgroup. In this group deem exklusiv girls between 11-14years, and we make small journies for a weekend every month with our tend in beutyful regions with in a radius of Hamburg. We singing very much, playing together, tinkering something and having fun! In the summerholidays we travel around for three weeks to a foreign cauntry, till now I was in Austria, Wales, Italy, France an Greek with the childs.
This big journies are the special moments every year!
If I'm not at the scouts, I spent my time for reading, going to cinema, an I like going on a journy. Morever I'm on the way with friends to test strange cities.
Now I want to dare passing in a foreign cauntry fore a long time. I know people who were many years in Ireland, so I know, wich interesting mentality be represented there, and I wonder whether to go through this expeience.
But the importend reason is nevertheless to raise my english with making use of the languarge every day, because I want to employ it perfektly in the next years of my life.
Since I can collect experience with kids, I want unconditional a year as an Au Pair in Ireland. Because I growed by my father, its not strong for me to dispatch some indoor work, since I were competent for every occour work. I know, that I will take pleasure in the challenge of living with a stange family in a foreign cauntry and master everything.
I hope to find a family wich is also cheerful and jovial like me!
With friendly greetings, S.
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